8 comments on “Despair

  1. willowdot21 says:

    Oh! Yes Bear you are writing my soul right now, you lay me bare to the world. Only now after writing about depression this week do I see your words…. Two minds as one across the miles maybe. xxx


  2. Nomzi Kumalo says:

    Absolutely brilliant Haiku, Bear. I love it. 🙂 Magical how a few words fall together like that and can move something within me. 🙂


  3. Deborah says:

    This is powerful imagery that definitely evokes that feeling of despair. Finally having the cage open, only to realize that one’s ability to fly has been hampered by the damage already sustained. Haikus don’t always get me, but this one sure did! Kudos, Bear!



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